This Is my second draft. This is better than my initial draft because I chose which design I wanted to use and went with it. I also like this one more because I had a better idea of how to make movement with the lines. I could improve this because it looks too much like the example shown to me. I would like to come up with my own idea and see the different possibilities that can come from that.
This is my final draft. This is better than the previous because it's my own idea. I like this one because I could incorporate straight lines and still make it look like there is movement. One thing that I could improve on is is darkening and lightening the lines. By doing this it can make it look like the lines are coming closer or going farther away from you.